Brekkon arroyo
10/31/2016 09:53:11 am
the guy simply exploded.the end.
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brekkooon arroyoo
10/31/2016 09:53:59 am
good job!
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Christian jarabek
11/7/2016 06:25:05 am
Haha, good joke, but you need to make it more longer!
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blaisen
11/7/2016 06:49:55 am
dab
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Brynn Mayo
10/31/2016 09:55:00 am
Max was walking across the street on fire because he went up to space the day before. Everyone else on the space shuttle sadly pass away. The shuttle didn't make it, he was the only one that did. But he did come down on fire??
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Wendy Fracisco
10/31/2016 09:55:25 am
There was an astordnot in space and he wanted to go home to see his family.so then he went to his space shuttle and went home his shuttle was o n fire and so was he. The guy did not even feel the fire so he kept on walking.
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Brynn Mayo
10/31/2016 09:56:29 am
good job
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breanna verzani
10/31/2016 09:59:11 am
good job you did good
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Jessica Marquez
11/7/2016 06:32:26 am
I like your story
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brooklyn james
10/31/2016 09:56:05 am
a astronaut came flying out of a rocket ship and he caught on fire. every one was confused because he was perfectly fine . just then he turn into superman. that's how superman came to earth
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breanna verzani
10/31/2016 09:59:56 am
that was very good.....
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10/31/2016 09:56:54 am
An astronaut just came out of a fire not knowing that he was on fire. He caused more buildings to catch fire and soon he found out he was on fire. But he was to late. He burned to death.
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Breanna Verzani
10/31/2016 09:58:18 am
The astronaut came blazing through the air and landed on his two front feet. Everybody that he was some kind of a monster because he could've died but he didn't. Then it he stated it all! He was the first person to stay alive forever!!!
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Jadyn Perez
10/31/2016 10:03:04 am
cool story it is really AWESOME good idea
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Joshua Heineman
10/31/2016 10:13:31 am
No body can live forever.
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Melanie Conda
11/7/2016 06:25:41 am
I think it is a good story, It could use some work but it is good so far
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Liliana palmillas
11/7/2016 10:01:09 am
i liked this story
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Jose Vera
10/31/2016 10:01:09 am
The astronaut was walking towards a UFO but then a alien shot him with a fire blast and he wasn't hurt so he shot the alien and walked away in style
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toby
11/7/2016 09:49:22 am
suck my ass
Joshua Heineman
10/31/2016 10:10:53 am
There was a man, a man named Daryl Popson. Daryl was a street performer. Meaning he did strange things to bewilder, confuse or in impress people. Today he was in a fire proof suit made to look like an astronaut's suit.He had an employee set fire to him. He was ready to start. He slowly walked out into public not saying anything. He felt eyes upon him as he walked in the middle of the street heading toward shops. Someone ran out of the shops and sprayed him with a fire extinguisher he continued to walk as if nothing happened. Then as he was in front of subway he took off his helmet and smiled.
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Melanie Conda
11/7/2016 06:24:39 am
I really like that you gave the astronaut a name
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Jadyn Perez
10/31/2016 10:19:28 am
Once there was a astronaut in space and he was coming back home to earth before he died. He noticed that his door was a bit open so he went to shut it but instead of shutting it he fell out and he was falling to his death. He had the astronaut suit 5000 so he did not feel it when he was on fire. After he was still on fire and while he was STILL on fire he noticed with the suit 5000 he had a parachute that he knew was not safe but didnt care.So he pulled the string and he was carefully falling to a grassy land. After he finally got to the ground he quickly took off the parachute and walked over to this city to get some coffee. Everybody was screaming in fear that they would catch on fire too and die. HE was very close to the coffee shop when a lady stopped him and told him about his appearance and how he was on fire. He looked back to the people and said you see how people treat me. I risk my life to make discoveries for you and you wont let me have a simple cup of coffee! The lady was trying to dodge all the fire on him. then the lady held up a mirror and the astronaut look at his reflection. Oh, 1 I feel so bad and 2 AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH! IM ON FIREEEEEEEE HELP ME the astronaut said running around crazy. then he got out of fire and he apologized to everyone
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Adelina Topete
11/7/2016 06:23:04 am
its about a man well astronaut that is on fire in time square or NYC
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Christian Jarabek
11/7/2016 06:23:14 am
There was a man that had a astronaut suit on and there was a fire and he wanted to test out if the suit could withstand it so he walked through the fire and started walking across the street, the end
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Melanie Conda
11/7/2016 06:24:00 am
The astronaut fell into the atmosphere and then landed on a air mattress. After that, he was walking around not even knowing that he was on fire.
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Michael Benson
11/7/2016 06:24:22 am
a astronaut came crashing on to earth at 1000 miles per hour. he and five others where on fire in the space ship. Out of the 6 of them he was the only one to come out of the crashed ship but he was still on fire and the firemen helped him.
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keeliblanche
11/7/2016 06:28:47 am
good story I liked it
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ruben
11/7/2016 06:34:00 am
thats agood story
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Kirk Houts
11/7/2016 06:25:12 am
A astronaut comes back to Erath he thinks it is Erath but it is actually but is the planet No. So he saw him burring and he thought I must not be on Earth am I on No or eat or food I do not know. Let me see the people have 5 arms and 3 legs so I must be on NO.I fond it out I'm so happy. Now I'm going home
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Kirk Houts
11/7/2016 06:27:22 am
Great job me
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Carter Ellis
11/7/2016 06:38:01 am
that was confusing
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jj khamvanh
11/7/2016 06:25:29 am
the guy just came from space and the space suit over heated. someone put gas on him then set him on fire
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11/7/2016 06:26:10 am
An astronaut just came out of a space ship that was on fire an didn't know he was on fire. Everyone looked at him and the astronaut thought 'why is everyone looking at me'. He looked at himself and said ohhhhh. after that some random guy came by with a fire extinguisher and sprayed him. The End
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Kirk Houts
11/7/2016 06:26:51 am
IT was so good
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ruben
11/7/2016 06:33:29 am
that's a good story
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Carter Ellis
11/7/2016 06:37:10 am
that was funny
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blaisen
11/7/2016 06:52:32 am
dab on it
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nick montelongo
11/7/2016 09:49:14 am
nice zeth
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holmesj20
11/7/2016 09:53:28 am
I love it
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Tyrell Lafferty
11/7/2016 06:27:03 am
An astronaut fell of his space ship and got caught in earths asmentfer witch sent him on fire
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Liliana palmillas
11/7/2016 10:00:25 am
end of story?
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keeli blanche
11/7/2016 06:28:08 am
the was an alien astronaut tavaling around in space and suddanaly he hit hard on to a fire ball astroied rock and the rock took him all the way down to earth where he bured
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11/7/2016 06:29:52 am
the astronaut fell on house that on fire and that's why the picture is like that.
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Jessica Marquez
11/7/2016 06:31:27 am
There was a astronaut traveling to space. Today was the day when he was going to go back home earth. When he got the earth he just landed. He did not realized that he had fire on his back. Everyone was scared so people grab some water or something to get the fire off. Last he was all good and he back to his family and spent time with them.
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Ruben
11/7/2016 06:32:42 am
there was a space expadishin the space ship crashed the asternot fell fell from his space ship and earthes gravitation all pull was pulling him down he was on fire he ended up in new york city
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Carter Ellis
11/7/2016 06:36:00 am
There was an astronaut in space and he was ready to go back to Earth so he did. When he came back to Earth he was so rounded by fire so he had to jump in the fire. And he remembered he this suit is fire resistance so he walked to the nearest city. When he was walking through the fire and he got caught on fire. He walked to the city and still on fire as everyone staring at the astronaut in confusion.
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11/7/2016 06:36:28 am
An astronaut was just about to leave for space when his partners forgot about him. His partners were just about to leave when the one guy with the dog tattoo remembered about him but before he could say anything the controller went off. Off they went into the sky, 5 MINS BEFORE. The forgotten astronaut was just about to board when BOOM the spaceship took off and set the astronaut on fire. And after that he said I give up and walked home
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nick montelongo
11/7/2016 09:48:27 am
nice joey bear
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toby
11/7/2016 09:51:11 am
hi
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Blaisen
11/7/2016 06:47:28 am
All he did was dab in space and he exploded and fell to earth
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nick montelongo
11/7/2016 09:47:36 am
a astronaut was about to board the rocket when it took off and set him on fire he realized he was stuck on the rocket and then he fell to the ground
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Jordy Cambara
11/7/2016 09:48:58 am
he maybe crashed to earth from space cause he has a space suit and was on fire and on ground so it looks like he came from space
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deayeg20
11/7/2016 09:49:52 am
cool
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Toby Meyer
11/7/2016 09:50:40 am
he came form aspac and as he came down he cauat on fire.
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holmesj20
11/7/2016 09:52:04 am
why was he on fir
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yarelyfranco
11/7/2016 09:52:32 am
the man was on fire . the man died . the end
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braulio olivarez
11/7/2016 09:52:44 am
randy ortan rko him into the fire
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madison brunson
11/7/2016 09:53:03 am
hes on fire
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oniel
11/7/2016 10:12:13 am
maybe that wiy
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Anahi
11/7/2016 09:53:43 am
An astronaut was walking home then there was a fire. Since his suit was fire proof he didn't die
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Kinsey Elgert
11/7/2016 09:53:55 am
an astronaut that caught on fire in New York City, walking a cross the street, but still no one notices him
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olivia winter jackson
11/7/2016 09:54:31 am
i think that it is a astronaut walking in the street on fire because it got caught on fire by a fire at a restaurant and no body notices him or hleps him in LA an people just stair an thinks that nothing is happening an drives strait by and stairs at him and doesnt call the firefighter or police to help
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Jadyn Perez
12/12/2016 10:00:00 am
good story
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tristin
11/7/2016 09:54:48 am
I was walking down elm street when I saw a astronaut on fire and I did something that a citizen would do all the time I took off my jacket and I started padding him down and I thought I just saved a mans life. I would never forget that day!!
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Alex Castro
11/7/2016 09:55:23 am
There was a astronaut ate a blue potato when he was in space flying down to earth. He some how survived and he did not know he was on fire. Then he said "a potato flew around"... Then he exploded. Holy Jesus help meeeeeeee!!!!!
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Antonio Ferraro
11/7/2016 09:56:25 am
One day an astronaut went into space for a few days. While he was coming back, his rocket was malfunctioning. While they were going through the atmosphere, the rocket was lit on fire and destroyed.
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Diana
11/7/2016 09:57:08 am
There was a fire. Then the astronaut went in the fire. Last he caught on fire
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freya20
11/7/2016 09:57:32 am
How did the fire start. I didn't turn off the oven.
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liliana palmillas
11/7/2016 09:58:03 am
this guy by the name albert just came from space.he than was just walking home normaly like nothing ever happend.he notice he had FIRE on his back.he honestly didnt care.then he saw traffic and didnt want to bother so he got off of the car and left. the end
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Jadyn Perez
12/12/2016 10:01:26 am
Nice story it is really creative
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Nicolas Gomez
11/7/2016 09:59:48 am
the astronaut was in space when he went out of the space ship he did not realize he was on fire and in to earth. and fell on to the street and was still on fire and walked it off like a boss.
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juan
11/7/2016 09:59:54 am
The astronaut is walking across the street.
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jorge godoy
11/7/2016 10:00:08 am
there was an astrounaut on fire. i think he was being stupid. i think it was the rockets folt
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oniel
11/7/2016 10:09:16 am
maybe he wake up and hons his was biming and that wiy he's in fire
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Jorge Hernandez
11/7/2016 10:11:28 am
he was in the national space station.He was attacked by alien on the yes he was on the moon.The alien had flame breath and super strength.The alien attacked him with his flame breath first.Then he used his super strength to punch him in the face.He was intoxicated and he landed on earth but the astronaut died of being toxic
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Maranda Hamar
12/12/2016 10:00:34 am
he was in a spaceship and the spaceship blew up but he fell to earth but he had a parachute so when he made it to the ground he thought he was perfectly fine until everyone was avoiding him than he noticed on fire than he panicked so he died
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ernesto frazier
12/12/2016 10:03:20 am
The guy went to the moon and when they came back they went to fast and crashed near water and a city every body died but that one and he was on fire and he did not even know he was on fire so he went in to the city and someone took a picture of him and he did not know were he was and then someone went to him and said you are on fire then he asked were is he and the person said New York.
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Angelica Stansberry
12/12/2016 10:05:46 am
One day there was an astronaut. The astronauts name was Jay. He loved to visit the moon. But his house was on fire. He went in side to save his cat Aphmau.Jay walked to the fire department.Then Jay caught on fire. Then Jay died. THE END!
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Ivan
1/30/2017 06:22:07 am
Astronaut is lit
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juana joaquin
1/30/2017 09:56:28 am
the man don't die and he in in life............................................
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