The fox was waling across the ice and suddenly the ice started breaking. The fox ran tried to run across but couldn't suddenly he felt his body drop. The fox was underwater and was freezing and couldn't get out. The fox was there for days the water and the ice formed around him and he was stuck forever. The End
"The End" is not a sentence and you need to have at least 5 sentences.
its a good story and amazing discription
The fox probably did fall then couldn't get back up. But nice story it was really good
One snow day there were foxes outside and they were hunting for food. There were to much snow that the foxes could not walk through it.Then, one of the of the foxes were walking and it fell in a pile of snow that was melting.The fox was trying to get out of it but he could not and he kept trying. The fox try one more time and that's when he got out of the pile of snow and then he went back to hunting for food.
nice story I'm story is werid........;)
Nice Job, But in the picture it looked like he was frozen in ICE.
that was good
I really like your story but there are some words there that will be effecting your grade because it doesn't make sense. Good Job though(:
The Fox was in a very cold winter the fox was trying to get a drink but the fox hit it's nose on the ice. Then the fox was starting to walk on the ice but the ice was strong enough to hold the fox. After a few hours of wondering on the ice the fox was very thirsty for water. He started to jump to break the ice but cracked it a bit so the fox continued to jump. Then the ice break and the fox fell in he struggled and struggled but the water have other plan and the fox froze to death and the water froze around the fox too.
not a fox
it's a fox are just a bad person to tell if it's a fox or not? i think you are!
The fox wouldn't die because if it died their wouldn't be picture of it and water behind it and plus it was probably about to drown and people just put a rope around it.
nice story that made sence
Once a upon time there was a fox wondering around. And he was walking out in the artic and he saw water. Next, he was walking tell he saw a seal the seal said not to go in the water. But did he know the water. Then, he got stuck in the water and he stayed there for weeks till he died.
i think that this is a very sad thing. i honistly do not think anything like this should ever happen. i would most defidently cry if i ever were to see this in person. if this would have actuly happened i would be out there saving all of these poor animals. i mean the things that happen to these poor animals is just sad a very sad thing we should make a club that can prevent thing like this from happening to these very poor animals.
i feel ya
the fox forgot that he slept in the snow. then he got stuck in the ice. the ice was there because it rained and got cold.so then the fox died.the end.
A mama fox had three baby's that were very young.they were all in a cave when a big storm hit. it was a snow tornado that knocked down a lot of trees. a tree was about to fall on a little fox but its mom pushed him out of the way and the mom got hit. she told her son to run away and find someone to love. so he ran as fast as he could. he fell in hole when running on ice. he was stuck and could not get out.
I like it was a good story
There was a fox was playing on the freeze water. he fell out on the water then he couldn't go out.
I agree the fox fell in but the only thing I don't agree with is that it couldn't get out because the fox would just dig a little spot to pull it's self up.
One night a fox was hunting for food he smelt a fish in the lake he jumped in to get it.But seance he was blind he did not see that the lake was frozen so he jumped in trying to get the fish and got stuck.So he cried for help but his fox friends did bot come so he was stuck for days.But then a bear came and said to him i will help you out if you will build me a den for the winter.So he agreed to do it and that is the end
i don't think bears can Talk
they can talk
The fox probably went to take a drink from the water.Then the fox fell in.But,then the fox couldn't swim because the water is to cold.The fox was probably yelping and whinnying. when the fox finally stopped someone saw the fox and called a animal rescuer.
Nice story, I like how you made it so that he got saved
it was a dog a cold dog that ran away and froze in to the water
I THOUGHT your response could be better
it was sad when i first saw it because it looks like he died and the water was so cold that he froze if this was real i would probably cry.
i would feel really bad if i saw this and i would tell someone or do something besides looking at it and taking pictures of the poor fox. R.I.P foxy hopefully he lived his life and was proud to be a fox.
i feel you to buddy ):
this fox i think froze in the water. or the weather. i think that he was to cold and froze then water came up and froze.and somewhone came up and took a picture.then he took a bath.and froze and floted to shore.then he died from being to cold.
this fox is die or swimming. but it looks like it is die. because if a fox goes in cold water they will die. or he is taking a bath or catching fish.then he die because ot was to cold.
one day a fox was hunting for prey.He saw a little pond it was halfway
frozen but the fox did not think it was frozen.So the next day the fox
ran back to the pond a went hunting for fish.He wanted to go ice fishing but when he stepped on the ice it broke. So he froze in the ponds ice waters trapped.So for the rest of the foxes life he would be frozen
I like it is a great story
That's a neat story!
Johnny was trotting home from work one day when he came across a lake. He decided to take the shortcut home and trot across the lake. When he got about half way across the frozen lake he got really cold so he started to run but he slipped. After he slipped he cracked the ice a little bit but he didn't think it would matter.He didn't know that the ice kept cracking every step he took but by the time he found out it was too late.
your story is great
real good buddy :)
good story :)
One day Mr. Fox was trotting home from work when the air became very cold. Since it was winter he expected this but didn't think it would be so cold. He started running faster and accidentally ran into a lake. Mr.Fox paddled his hardest but the frigged water made him weak. The became colder and he couldn't keep going,the lake froze and he was stuck. Mr.Fox was stuck there forever.
This fox was frozen alive by a giant rain and snowstorm. One night there was a baby fox who had been separated from his mother and father. It had grown and learned it's way through the forest, until one night when a snowstorm and rainstorm came when the fox was sleeping. He was on the ground under nothing but the sky and the stars. When he woke, he ran across what looked like a patch of frozen lake, but he ended up falling into the lake and freezing to death.
It was cold, it was the middle of the winter .There in the middle of the snow was a fox a very lonely fox. The fox needed to cross the river there was more prey on the other side.He was crossing the river he got colder and colder.Then the water froze he stayed there for ever. THE END
Its a good story good job
I think that the fox was walking acros the ice and fros todeath
thats verry true
It was Winter and the fox was trying to step on the ice but he fell in ice. he had his hole body in the ice and he could"t get out. I think that someone helped the dog get out and took him to the vet and be taken care of. I think that he was very cold and got stuck. Maybe he was running and got in the ice.
The fox was looking for food while it was snowing then the fox got stuck in a whole and couldn't get out then he got frozen stuck.The fox was trying to get food for the cubs while the ice was thin and the fox fell threw.The fox died.The fox was attack by another fox then died.it didn't have a chance
you did good.
Well the fox must have gotten pushed over with all the snow. The fox has been there for a while. And now its froze in the snow and people are being disrespectful by taking pics.
ya thats really rude i agree
i agree too
I thine your story is grat
This fox's name was Amber because her coat was the color of amber. Amber did not have many friends because she was a fox but she had her den. One day she was trying to to find food and saw a lot of fruit across the lake. Amber started to walk across the ice plated lake but she fell in the lake. In a mater of seconds ice formed around her, and now she is stuck and dead.
That my story.
nice story intresting
It was winter and the fox was trying to get back home but he need to
cross the ice to get back but when he cross the ice the ice start to
brake and the fox wit in the code ice water and for days the fox was stuck in the code ice and in the code water then the fox start to die in the ice.
that is foxy
One day a fox was hunting for food, and he was very cold. It was winter and the fox was not able to find food. The fox decided to hibernate because it was very cold and he could not find any food. The fox went to a lake and waited. He waited a whole day, but the lake finally froze over. The fox went to sleep as the snow covered him and waited for spring.
HAPPILY EVER AFTER!!!!!!!
i think that a baby fox got washed up or theres was mabey a really bad flood and the baby fox got hurt really bad
The fox was was trying to get a drink of water. Then the fox accidentally fell in. He was luckily a good swimmer. He was cold but he didn't care, all he cared about was getting to safety. Then he finally made it to land.
a new born fox was found in the river.After a very harsh winter night he tried escsping by swiming into a lake.he woke up in a pile of ice and stuck.people recall hearing voices screming coming out of the fox.luckly he is safe.
One day there was a fox named Bill that had a snowball fight. There was a cow, a dog. a mouse, and a pelican. The cow had an idea to put snow over Bill. So Bill died and turned into a ghost and sent curses on everyone. Which one day killed everyone. THE END.
That's really sad
one day i got home from school. i went outside to go play in the snow with my friends. i heard a whining noise and scratching. so i go look around and i found a fox stuck in the snow but i digging a hole around it so it could get out
I think the fox died. That is why he froze.I feel bad for the fox. That must have been have snow.
The fox is a dead man. Because it is frozen. I think its frozen because it was not in hibernation yet and it snowed. But who would take this photo of a dead fox that's just dumb. It looks like a baby fox that got caught up in the snow.
The poore fox got stuck in the snow and codit git out so the mom help the baby git out die end.
i think the fox was hunting for food and it was snowing alot and he got stuck for days and died
the fox was in the forrest and fell in the water and it froze. He got stuked and couldnt get out . he died becuse of no air
I wonder why there is a fox in the ground. Hmm i guess i should post this. But should i because it will scare people. It does look funny though. Okay lets do it.
A fox was looking for prey because he was starving. Then he suddenly saw a green rabbit he was confused because it was green. He ran to it and he appeared on ice. He sees the rabbit and runs to it and the rabbit disappears again. He got so frustrated then he saw ii in the water, he tries to jump but the fox dose not have enough strength he falls into the water and then he sees so many other animals.
you realy gave me a good descipsion of the story because I did not read it but good job
there was a fox that was over the water while walking he fell in the ice. he was running and fell in the ice
The fox was looking for food so he went inside a house and looked for food he found the fridge and ate some chicken.But the owner of the house heard him knocking over things.He found the fox and tried to kill him with a shot gun.The Owner of the house chased the fox to the forest.The fox escaped and had to swim over a river.YAY he escaped
There was a fox. That jumped in a cold lake. Then he was trying to get a stick.Then trying to swim to shore. After awhile he died.
the fox was hunting for food .the fox found a deer .the fox fall in the hole .
became it was looking food and feel ni ice
STOP DROP AND ROLL!!
There Was a Fox Named Billy and Billy Was Looking For Food. Billy Couldn't See The Ice Because The Was To much Snow. So He didn't know that he was walking on ice then he fell through the ice and was stuck in a hole
the young fox was sleeping. then a storm came along.the next morning he woke up and he was frozen.sadly he passed away and all of his friends missed him
one day there was a fox and the fox want to go on a walk. He saw that there was water and the water turned in to ice.The fox got stuck there and nobody wanted to help.
how was he not dying and what make that happen. where was this at and who was in side and who designed the suit.
get a life fox
there was a fox and he died. so nobody knew where he was. And he wanted his mom because he was lost. Then he ran in water and the water froze. Then he never came back again.
This fox was trying to go to his family when suddenly, the ice started cracking. So he and his parents were running like Forest Gump. The ice finally broke and collided together when he was stuck in the ice. so he's family left him behind crying. little did they know they were freezing him even more. and he shall sit there frozen in tears.
one poor dog in a cold water I don't think if he going to survive.........
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